not hard enough, make it harder and more industrial sounding, like this
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SCgr7YdYN7w[/youtube]
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uQjYNvSUTZw[/youtube]
*yes, i do like some electro, not only rock/metal
as it is climax, it must blow-of head