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Offline MikeGT

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Like i said, i'm helping my sister writting an letter, for her collage stuff. If and english native speaker could look at it and make it well writtien, it would be amazing. Thanks.


Honorable Gentlemen,
I, ** Martins, a student of 4th year Bachelor of Science in Nutrition at the Faculty of Nutrition and Food Science, University of Porto, I am currently interning at the Health Unit Place the Minho, EPE, in Viana do Castelo, Portugal. Since this is a traineeship and is performed as the last step before the Bachelor, I have to do a research work, which I have to defend before a jury. The theme of my work is entitled «Height estimated from the length of the ulna in adults in the district of Viana do Castelo». This project will be to check whether the table created by the Malnutrition Action Group, Committee of the British Association for Parenteral and Enteral Nutrition and inserted into the screening method called malnutrition Malnutrition Universal Screening Tool, is adapted to the population residing in the district of Viana do Castle. For this to be possible I would need to know how we obtained the height and length of the ulna for the English population. I should like to provide this information and if it were possible for me to reveal the source and the sample number, through which instruments the data obtained and how they created the table at the book's explanatory MUST.
Thank you for availability,
I await an answer,
** Martins



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Like i said, i'm helping my sister writting an letter, for her collage stuff. If and english native speaker could look at it and make it well writtien, it would be amazing. Thanks.


Honorable Gentlemen,
I am Martins, a student in my 4th year of Bachelor of Science in Nutrition at the Faculty of Nutrition and Food Science, University of Porto. I am currently interning at the Health Unit Place the Minho, EPE, in Viana do Castelo, Portugal. Since this is a traineeship and is also the last step before the Bachelor, I am required to do some research work, which I then have to defend before a jury. The topic of my work is entitled «Height estimated from the length of the ulna in adults in the district of Viana do Castelo». The purpose of this project is to check whether the table created by the Malnutrition Action Group, Committee of the British Association for Parenteral and Enteral Nutrition and inserted into the screening method called malnutrition Malnutrition Universal Screening Tool, is applied to the population residing in the district of Viana do Castle. For this to be possible I would need to know how the height and length of the ulna for the english population was measured. I would like you to  provide this information and if it is possible I would also like to reveal the source and the sample number through which instruments obtained the data and how they created the table at the book's explanatory MUST.

Thank you in advance and looking forward to your answer,

** Martins

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Thanks gen ;)